Corolla 2009 tuned

by **alejit0** on Wed Nov 03, 2010 18:08 pm

Hi, this is my first automotive´s render, suggestions or tips are welcome

by **banned** on Fri Nov 05, 2010 22:02 pm

Hi alejit0,

as the first automotive shot very nice, but some criticts. The Background Concrete-Map is too low, it must be higher for mor details. The windshield have no interessting reflection, too black. The Yellow/black Stone looks like as a noise procedual map. Can you better. The Light -Setup need more accents.

mfg
hot chip

by **John Grey** on Sat Nov 06, 2010 17:51 pm

Hi alejit0!

Nice car! I like the details and the colour.
Nevertheless I noticed some small things with potential of improvement:
- Rear spoiler seems to hover above the car
- Windshield cleaner shows over the windshield
- Bump map in the yellow-black bank in the backbround is (IMHO) to strong

Keep the good work up,
cheers,

JohnGrey

by **alejit0** on Sun Nov 07, 2010 20:43 pm

Thank you so much, nice and kind comments. Please administrator move this post to working progress

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by **alejit0** on Tue Nov 16, 2010 4:52 am

I´m testing many ways to create a better render, this time with other textures .